[Argumentative essay]Do students have to go to an academy?

 Do you go to an academy? Most students these days go to academies. They go to English academy, Math academy...etc. Then I'll ask another question. Do you think it is good for students going to an academy? Many people argue about this question. 

 However, students should not go to an academy.

 First, it causes stress for many students. Students feel stress in school, and it's terrible for them to get more stress at the academy. And, they feel stress because they have to study many things and have to do a lot of homework. Sometimes it causes students to commit suicide. 

 Next, students can't do self-directed Learning at the academy. Academy teachers always teach and order students do this and that. I learned that self-studying is better than studying in an academy. But if you go to an academy, you won't be able to self-studying. 
 Third, it causes health problems for students. For example, the survey of teenagers' health problems became higher than 2005. Students these days don't exercise very well because of the academy. Students have to do homework and study. Academies make the students unhealthy.
 People who agree with going to an academy think it is good for students because they can learn more and they can improve their skills. They think academies give benefits to the students. But on the other side, people who disagree students going to an academy think academies give stress to the students. They think students learn enough in school.
I disagree students going to an academy because of these reasons.